Oh my bedroom, what a wonderful place, please let me tell me tell you about my bedroom, the most brilliant place.
Around me lay clothes, so many clothes. With the car bed filled to the brim with books.
The combination of strong perfume and stinky socks fills the air. But that abomination of smells leads into the worst of all, my collection of chewed gum.
You would seem to be standing on a sea, soon you would realise it’s made out of dirty clothes. Latching onto my shredded bed cover you would be able to fell their agony.
Ticking violently my broken clock would remind you of a horror story. Wind would be howling, thrashing my room.
The series of pictures on the wall shows how I looked centuries ago, the car bed forever reminding me of my 8th birthday.
Is there any other place like this, you should hope not.
I like the way I used the guide correctly
My next step is to make sure I make my sentences more impactful